Things keep spiraling.
... and it's only going to get worse.
Things keep spiraling.
... and it's only going to get worse.
6 thoughts on “An Order of Separation”
wessodog
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Ryan Gindlesperger
I’ve been trying to figure out how best to convey what’s coming without just info-dumping… but ultimately, it was time for a step back for a record-keeper’s-eye view.
Aerydian
Panel 11 (9th picture) Shows “VisRef-[i1-05]: S1”, but the following text panel identifies Shaw as Subject 3. Since Sarah is consistently identified as Subject 2, and Xiu Mai as Subject 4, I believe Shaw’s VisRef tag is in error.
I’m guessing Subject 3 is Shaw, and Subject 1 would be Derrick Franklin.
Aerydian
Also, I appreciate that Mekarei’s classifications are discrete from Magdalen’s (https://masterycomic.com/comic/a1pt3pg022/) so that there isn’t confusion between the two in case they were to somehow come up in proximity.
Ryan Gindlesperger
This is why I gotta stop finishing pages so late at night. This one was earlier than most lately, but still.
Also, I am so, so, SO happy that you not only caught it, but cared enough to catch and point it out.
You totally just made my day.
Aerydian
1) Oh no! You’re human, and make mistakes! However will we survive? *faints dramatically*
2) We appreciate your commitment to having pages up regularly and on time. Thank you for everything you do, because this story is awesome.
3) As the wife will happily (?) confirm, I’m incredibly pedantic. I had to stop and figure it out, so I figured others might like a footnote, and that you might appreciate the catch. Thanks for fixing it so promptly!