Published On: May 29, 2024

WIP – Great First Impression

7 thoughts on “WIP – Great First Impression

  1. Um, just a small pickled nit— you don’t “speak pinyin”, you “speak mandarin.” That’s like “speaking phonics” instead of “speaking English”.

    1. Ryan Gindlesperger

      I always appreciate having things like that pointed out.

      1. No critique at all. I had to ask my wife, (she was born in China.)

  2. How can they not notice Deej’s ears?

    1. Ryan Gindlesperger

      We’ll get to that.

  3. Without color, it’s hard to tell– Hand in the foreground, panel 3– Shaw’s hand, or Min Hua?

    1. Wups, my bad. I just realized all the girls are goin’ sleeveless, so the hand must be Shaw’s. Feeling a bit of trepidation about having to make Xiu Mei stop breathing?

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