Um, just a small pickled nit— you don’t “speak pinyin”, you “speak mandarin.” That’s like “speaking phonics” instead of “speaking English”.
I always appreciate having things like that pointed out.
No critique at all. I had to ask my wife, (she was born in China.)
How can they not notice Deej’s ears?
We’ll get to that.
Without color, it’s hard to tell– Hand in the foreground, panel 3– Shaw’s hand, or Min Hua?
Wups, my bad. I just realized all the girls are goin’ sleeveless, so the hand must be Shaw’s. Feeling a bit of trepidation about having to make Xiu Mei stop breathing?
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7 thoughts on “WIP – Great First Impression”
All-Purpose Guru
Um, just a small pickled nit— you don’t “speak pinyin”, you “speak mandarin.” That’s like “speaking phonics” instead of “speaking English”.
Ryan Gindlesperger
I always appreciate having things like that pointed out.
All-Purpose Guru
No critique at all. I had to ask my wife, (she was born in China.)
All-Purpose Guru
How can they not notice Deej’s ears?
Ryan Gindlesperger
We’ll get to that.
All-Purpose Guru
Without color, it’s hard to tell– Hand in the foreground, panel 3– Shaw’s hand, or Min Hua?
All-Purpose Guru
Wups, my bad. I just realized all the girls are goin’ sleeveless, so the hand must be Shaw’s. Feeling a bit of trepidation about having to make Xiu Mei stop breathing?