Feed that Craving
Jun09
Dom’s Donuts is a rebranding of the local favorite, “Dominick’s Donuts”.
There was a generational debate over the name that was finished by bringing in professional advice. The new signage was just put up last year.
Their crullers are great, but don’t bother with the coffee. It’s been sitting all day.
Wait what.
Strangers? White van. Ashno.
Right? xD
Generally rapists and kidnappers don’t drive white vans with BIG HONKIN’ DISH ANTENNAS on the roof, but still.
The last time we saw Sare she was covered in mud and plummeting to the ground. I must have missed something.
One of the most frustrating limitations of telling the story this way has to be the page-a-week pace.
This would be such a more satisfying experience as a solid read. I’ve been weighing the idea of having less happen per page but more frequent posts for a while now.
Paced more like a printed comic or webtoon chapter, scene transitions like these would be so much less confusing since the required connections wouldn’t take half a month to reach.
Definitely something I’ve been weighing.